Mmm...anyone looking for a Pernese-type candi?

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Mmm...anyone looking for a Pernese-type candi?

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Yes, I actually wrote something. But it's... long. 1700 words or so, not counting the background/stats section. And I'm not sure that it's very good, since I was up till 2 in the morning last night finishing it up, so I'm hesitant about putting it up for you guys to possibly tear into little bits and eat. <.<

The girl's mute, and has had a rather miserable life up to the point of the story, but I swear I had the idea for her -before- I read that awful awful not-at-all-really-pern book. And she has a very loud 'voice', sort of the reverse of a girl who hears dragons--the dragons can hear her, and she gives them a headache when she's mad. So not a complete mary sue I would hope...but still, far from the best story out there. XP

so if someone actually needs a pernie girl, I will send her, just 'cause I don't want her to just go to waste.

Yeah.


I will warn you, though, that I wrote the whole thing in one sitting with no references (my brother has my DLG and won't give it back), and I think only three of the characters and none of the locations have names. Er, and I don't think I ever said what color the one dragon was, but that was intentional... :P
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I have a clutch at Kavera Weyr, just opened, that needs candidates. Link's in my sig XD
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Post by Samber »

Oooh... yaypernese. I'll get her story and stats put up as soon as I get home, then you can decide whether you really want her or not.^^
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Post by caesiusdraco »

Coeptus Weir needs Candidates, too. I'm slowly working on getting the Xman clutch out and up for RP due to lack of normal bonders. So, if Jess doesn't want her, I'd like to have her. :)
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Post by Samber »

Oookay, here she is:

http://www.geocities.com/mintlilly/asso ... ffie-1.htm

Comments and critiques would be most helpful, it's been a while since I've written anything like this...
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Post by jess d »

I think the story's good :D I'd be glad to have her at Kavera. Just send me a form!
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