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Ephemerals -- Comments, crits please

Post by Samber »

Some of you may remember these guys:

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I ended up not doing anything with the images, 'cause they didn't look the way I wanted and Starburst beat me to miniature jungle-dwelling dragon anyway.

This is how they ought to look (only not quite, because the scanner i used is... fewmetsy):

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Riplakish, Emerald-eyed Leafwing White, Male

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Seliash, Sapphire-eyed Glasswing Silver, Female

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Phyish, Emerald-eyed Leafwing Black, Female

Basically, they're tiny, marsh-dwelling dragons, about as intelligent as really smart fire-lizards. In the wild, they live in cytes, groups consisting of a lead female, her harem (3-5 males), their offspring, and assorted related and unrelated menials. Rank is determined through challenges, fought until one dragon submits. These rarely end in death.

Females and males are usually the same size, though females tend toward heavier builds. There is only one female to every four males, and they tend to dominate. The lowest ranking females will usually have one mate, while a cytequeen may have as many as seven males in her harem, and mate with all of then. It is possible for each of the eggs in the same clutch to have a different father.

They won't bond, exactly, but can either partner with an intelligent companion as adults (dolphineer-style teamwork) or, if the correct procedure is followed, can be bonded to an individual shortly after hatching. The prospective bonder must be naturally empathic in some way, though, or it will fail.

Ephemerals come in five colors. Blacks and whites are small, usually 1-1.5 feet in length. Silvers and gold are a bit bigger, and a large cream can grow to be as long as three feet. Wingsails are usually 'flame', or a red-yellow mix, but in rare cases can be 'leaf' (varied green), 'river' (blue to purple), 'night' (black with dark purple mottling and gold or silver speckling or streaks), or 'glass' (transparent icy blue). Eyes are gem-like (they do NOT glow, they're just slightly insectoid) and are usually white, or diamond. Rarer eye colors include ruby, emerald, blue sapphire and jet.

All Ephemerals' names end in 'sh'.

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I'm rather happy with the pictures, and the information me and my brother put together, but they take an hour each to draw... 30 minutes to sketch, 15 to ink, and 15 to color unless there's something I'm really stuck on, in which case it takes even longer. All of the above, of course, are extremely unusual... the first two were practice, the second was a request from my brother, who needed something to cheer him up.

I don't know whether I ought to do anything with these beasties besides stick 'em on my wall and feel pleased... I want to eventually adopt them out (others, not these), and if I do I'll have to draw them by hand... I'm not sure I could handle stages.

Anyway, comments, crits?
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Post by Shard »

They are REALLY gorgeous!! They're certainly on MY list!!

The teeny one originally done is so cute! You really should do something with those anyway. Click and takes?? :) The outline is so nice, it'd be a shame to waste it!
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I could do click and takes, but the problem is, I've got stages for 'em, even if the first three are identical and the fourth one doesn't show wing color. I don't really have the patience for staged C&Ts...
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Those are really pretty, I would definitely go for one, if they become adoptable. They're all gorgeous, but I especially like the male; he just looks so elegant
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Samber wrote:I could do click and takes, but the problem is, I've got stages for 'em, even if the first three are identical and the fourth one doesn't show wing color. I don't really have the patience for staged C&Ts...
Well I've seen some that are staged, it just involves more pages online.

I'd just put em up on a table and have a description or link to the next stage. :)

because... I want one! :D
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Shard wrote:
Samber wrote:I could do click and takes, but the problem is, I've got stages for 'em, even if the first three are identical and the fourth one doesn't show wing color. I don't really have the patience for staged C&Ts...
Well I've seen some that are staged, it just involves more pages online.

I'd just put em up on a table and have a description or link to the next stage. :)

because... I want one! :D
I've seen those, too, and they bug the heck outta me... mainly because patience is a virtue that I lack, and I can't help clicking through to see the adults right away. :) I know of at least one place where you can pick out a pup, and then the rest of the stages arrive by email... that's cool, but ti would take even more of my time. Ehn.

If you really want, I could send you *all* of them, to do with as you like, but there's about... *counts on fingers, runs out of fingers, runs out of toes, and starts using teeth instead* 25 adult images, plus five chrysalises, plus two larvae and an egg makes... 33? Manylots. Manymanylots.
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*absolutely in love!*

Yeah, these guys are officially awesome ^__^

I must ask.. where do you get the inspiration for your poses? Is it from a RL animal, or do they just pop out of nowhere?
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Weell, they're pretty much just little tubes with wings, so I can do whatever I want with them... unlike dragons with detailed feet and legs. Details are my enemy. The poses kinda just show up after I start to draw... Seliash, though, I intended to draw that way. I've been wanting to draw a dragon in that pose for /ages/, but this is the first time I've actually succeded. :)
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Wow! :D

*drools* Those are amazing, you have much interest from my side.
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Post by Katasev »

XD something's just funny about the way you said that... tube-dragons. XDDD it's like... the dachsund of the dragoning world! X3

and they're adoooooooorable. i especially like the first one's pose for some reason. XD so cute!
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they are the weinerdogs of dragons! Lookit their little legs! :) heee! I thought that was great too. Tubes. :)

Tube of dragon.

*gets bitten by irate ephemeral.*
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Samber wrote:
I've seen those, too, and they bug the heck outta me... mainly because patience is a virtue that I lack, and I can't help clicking through to see the adults right away. :) I know of at least one place where you can pick out a pup, and then the rest of the stages arrive by email... that's cool, but ti would take even more of my time. Ehn.

If you really want, I could send you *all* of them, to do with as you like, but there's about... *counts on fingers, runs out of fingers, runs out of toes, and starts using teeth instead* 25 adult images, plus five chrysalises, plus two larvae and an egg makes... 33? Manylots. Manymanylots.
I'd like to see what I could do with a page, for ya. They're so tinycute, it's been ages since the Teenydragons have been available and that one reminded me of them.

Basically, 'choose your egg', then the page of chrysalis, and perhaps a java page with a random one which might come from that? It's not *that* difficult. :)
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So d'you want me to send you an e-mail with the pics in an attatched zip file, or what? Be nice to see something done with 'em. :D
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Sure, send them as a zip to my main account - lethe.gray @ sbcglobal.net :) That way I know i'll have room. oh wait they keep giving everyone more email space lol - I just NEVER clean any of my email accounts out.... booooo for more space... :) that addy will do.

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EEEEEE!

See, this is EXACTLY what I wanted to do with my flitters, at one point, but I couldn't find and use the java code. NOW I know how to do it! :)

Click on 'Critter Adoption' to start the process. I am SO pleased with how this turned out. THANK YOU SAMBER!!!!

http://www.geocities.com/planet_twenty_dragons/dc.htm
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GLEE! That's awesome, Shard :3 It's so fun! How many possible results are there?
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Post by Samber »

WHEEEEE! Belkabelkabelkabelka! (Mushrom, mushroom? o_0) *plays with it until she's gotten every single one* I loooove the abilities you came up with for these guys, Shard. :D Very cool. And it's fuuuun, too.
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Post by Shard »

Thanks! :)

I think she said there's 25 adults... The creepie stage has the same random java link as the individual pupa pages, so it's a random page leading to a random page.

And now planet 20 has flits! :) Ideal!
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