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Started last night, kept working this morning, and figured I'd share. Haven't inked yet and I intend to color it, since I'll be using it on my website.

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This is Mishuvel, the leader of the Citadel of Shadows. Five-fingered wings and yes, those are spikes coming from her shoulders. Her shoulders are a little broad, but I blame it on the fact that she has flight-capable wings. ^^

And yeah....she doesn't wear alot. ^^;; Sketch still isn't done, I'm messing with clothing folds (I'm so bad at it, ARG!) but otherwise, it's almost done. ^^;;; Comments? Ehe...
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Purty! Gonna color this?
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Yup. ^^
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just a quick anatomy note - since her right arm is held back a bit, you may wish to move her boob over closer to her arm. they don't usually sit that close together unless one's arms are more in front.

other than that one little nitpick, i think it looks WONDERFUL! *Squeebles* wish my faces/hair/ears/hands came out that awesome. XD rock!
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Post by Sargon »

beautiful! i love her face. Great detail but into it!

And yeah, what Katasev said about her boob, and also, you might want to put a few wrinkles in the wings to make them look like they're semi-folded. :D
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Oooh, doodles are fun! ^_^ Colours are even funner! She looks like a fun character. *camps out and waits for updates!*
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The commentary has led to me fixing the issue and I'm looking to lay her color later today. ^^
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Well, just to give you all a better look, here's how Mishuvel's working image looks as I clean her outline - the blue lines being finished and I'm still edging the black. Her working image size is at least twice this in dimensions, clocking at over 4mb in filesize. ^^;; I did mostly correct the anatomical discrepency that was pointed out, and I do think it looks much better now. ^^

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Also, though the image isn't entirely ready for color laying - I have to make it all blue first to be happy with it, I'm incredibly picky - I did do a color test for fun. Subject to change in the final image, but I like it. Mishuvel is fascinated by the color red so I figured it was appropriate.

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What I'd really like opinion on is the color for her wing sail color, I haven't decided if I want to keep it that really dark red yet.
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Wow... That's really nice! I think maybe a little lighter on the wing sails - it's skin after all, right? :) So, perhaps closer to her skin tone, but with a reddish tint? Gorgeous work.
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I'd say to keep the dark red--screw whether or not it's supposed to be like the rest of her skin! XD Dark red and black are fun in combo, and nice on the eyes. *votes for keepin's!*
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